Originally Posted by
SteveC
Purely stylistically, I'd make the following amendment:
"At my time at Primark I worked closely with customers, dealing with requests, customer care, this is where I learnt a lot about pre-sales activities and how to deal with customers with different problems, this experience I feel I will bring to my future jobs."
"During my time at Primark I worked closely with customers, dealing with requests and customer care. Here I learnt a lot about pre-sales activities, and how best to satisfy the needs of customers with a diverse range of problems; I aim to make use of such experience moving forward in my career."
You also need to change REFRENCES to REFERENCES, and it tends to be standard practice to include the names and contact details of two referees.
You need to clarify the following, for grammatical reasons:
"I also enjoy spending time with my friends socialising and music."
Perhaps "I also enjoy spending time with my friends, typically socialising and listening to music"?
However, I'd also note that most people tend to do this sort of thing, so that one might not be a particularly notable point to make on a CV.
Hope that helps.