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    Am I losing it? One for the ladies...

    I think I am with the wrong girl... Damn, it hurts me to write this... But I trust you people! I penned this in minutes - the only problem is, well... Do I really need to say?

    Let the world spin without me,
    The night sky turn alone;
    Let the moon cast long shadows
    over frothing river stones.

    I have no need of this world tonight,
    Pray, let the Faeries dance;
    Around the joyous solitude
    of the beauty I have glanced.

    O come my love, let’s join the dances
    With beating heart and fleeting glances,
    The piper waits, with knowing eye
    He’s seen us both, it’s almost time!

    Tell the world, turn without us
    Tell the sky to overlook;
    Let stars cover paper thin
    reflections on the brook.

    The bubbles on the water
    Dance a reel that ne’er be heard,
    Lest you know a place so secret
    you might dance in Midnight Ferns;

    I know this place, I’ll take you there
    If you have a heart, and have a care;

    We’ll dance the midnight reel all night,
    Then brought from slumber, not in fright,
    With mornings breathe and softest light
    Awake us both, midst field so strange?
    Where were we both? Together May?


    *Deleted* For my conscience... PS, the last verse is crap
    Last edited by Rob; 03-07-2004 at 02:31 PM.

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    That is fantastic rj45! Do you mean should you give it to your girlfriend? Why do you think you are with the wrong girl?

    Sorry for the questions, but I don't want to say yes give it to her or no don't without knowing the circumstances

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hidden Spirit
    That is fantastic rj45! Do you mean should you give it to your girlfriend? Why do you think you are with the wrong girl?

    Sorry for the questions, but I don't want to say yes give it to her or no don't without knowing the circumstances
    Well I was hoping this thread would sink cos I was a tad drunk when I posted.

    But heck, I'm proud of me writing. It was actually written for me ex (Shhh!).
    Still miss her dreadfully after 8 years. To the extent that I am never truly happy in a relationship (yet!?!)

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    Bless ya....
    Gotta love alcohol for fuelling raw emotions!

    You know what they say: "Better to have loved and lost........"

    You'll find someone, we all do - hell if there is someone out there for me (god knows where!) - then there's GOT to be someone out there for you babe!! x
    If you're not living on the edge, you take up too much room

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    Fingers crossed eh?

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    Do you still see your EX? are u friends or you gone your seperate ways?

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    We haven't seen each other since we split... We both knew without saying, it would be too painful.

    *edit* She is the only ex that I do not see. I dont leave on bad terms if I can at all help it.

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    It doesn't mean you don't love your girlfriend, just that pain is a greater muse than happiness, take it from me, I've been in happy relationships, all my songs are quite depressing, but it doesn't mean I'm not happy.

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