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    Wink Opinions: Beware Poetry

    Just wondering what you lot think of these. Ive written many more but these are a couple that seem to be ok to post on here

    The Watchers

    Control over the masses
    The spying eyes standing tall over the buildings
    Mapping out lives
    Recording events going nowhere
    Only needed
    To prove guilt
    The wide lens focus leering at its subjects
    Nothing noticed or unnoticed
    The legal disclaimer for this perverse

    Remote-control

    ‘CCTV IN OPERATION’

    Kings Cross Cues

    A thin grey veil entrances me

    As I look out on traffic-encrusted streets
    Scuttling pedestrians
    Avoiding snarling cubes of metal
    Stopping only for red

    Released greyhounds on
    Amber-green
    Rushing to the next stop

    Paying charges
    To sit in congestion




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    Nice one. Keep writing them mate.

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    Not usually a poetry fan, but they seem quite good and not pretentious or cheesy like a lot of poetry does.

    (oh, and should 'cues' be spelt 'queues' or am i missing something there? :-))

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    "Cue" like prompt/sigal...traffic lights...links to queue's like congestion

    If you don't get me then I understand, but I was trying to be clever

    and thanks for the comments
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    Quote Originally Posted by hexah
    Games are developed by teams of talented people and sometimes electronic arts

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    Quote Originally Posted by kempez
    "Cue" like prompt/sigal...traffic lights...links to queue's like congestion

    If you don't get me then I understand, but I was trying to be clever

    and thanks for the comments
    I understand now, I was just being thick

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