CeBIT 2007 : Press Releases Review - 13th March

[Navin]

Let’s take stock of today’s CeBIT 2007 related press releases, all part of the HEXUS.service to you, our valued readership.

Get the lowdown by reading this HEXUS.headline.

[kalniel]

That page reads like a rap song..

"Get the lowdown,
Get the lowdown,
Get the lowdown, yeah!"

[Navin]

It is supposed to be engaging so if it reads like a rap song, it is doing the trick

[kalniel]

Engaging what target audience?

Might I suggest some hunting for some alternatives to the phrase 'get the lowdown'?

[Navin]

It was supposed to sound cool

Already in the pipeline, not really my style at all to be honest