Doing a mini series with a DeLorean
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Doing a mini series with a DeLorean
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Back to the future.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr
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527A9226.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr
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527A9222.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr
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527A9215.jpg by jonneymendoza, on Flickr
CC welcome
Technically competent pictures but artistically, there's no real 'story' to them. The subject matter is fine and the attempt to lead the viewer on a whimsical miniature 'jaunt' is obvious but the car itself isn't enough to make it 'fun'.
I'd suggest involving characters to make it more interesting with a 'scenario' for each which in turn will more successfully lead your audience down the 'Land of the Giants' theme you're aiming for.
j.o.s.h.1408 (21-04-2013)
quality ok
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